Saturday, October 1, 2016

Time Zones

OCTOPOWRIMO-2016


Time to revel
Certain time lapses
Brooding over
As 
Spilled coffee.
Too many dents In those words.   
Where they come from?
Who utters them?
Why do they cause pain?
A cacophony of tennis balls
Tic-tac, tic-tac,tic-tac.
Marinated thoughts 
Dance in a 
Kaleidoscopic carnival.



7 comments:

  1. Lovely, glad to have you writing along with us at OctPoWriMo.

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    1. Thank you Morgan. This annual retreat helps to purge the negativity brooding in the soul :)

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  2. A favorite line: "Marinated thoughts
    Dance in a
    Kaleidoscopic carnival."

    Those thoughts have had time to take on flavor and nuance. I like it! xoA

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    1. Thank you very much Annis. You have been a constant support in this journey :)

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  3. "Marinated thoughts" - love it.

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