Saturday, July 24, 2021

Life Goes By

 The Sunday Muse 


                                                            prompt image by Shay,


With stories of the happy princes and princesses

A childhood stagnated  on a canvas of seamless fairy tales

There were moments when holding tightly to a little friend 

Those tales belonged to another world.


Deep rooted fears erupted within those four walls

Waiting and trying to make some sense of the chaos

The loud noises, and the screaming voices

Shook the vulnerable heart, clutching on unshed tears.


There were days when inanimate expressions

Erased the lines of aching fear and broken dreams

How wonderful it was to have and hold

Someone who would listen, sooth and heal without uttering a word!


If one could have that same sense of security

In the waning evenings of a lifeless reality!



Participating in : The Sunday Muse

26 comments:

  1. A veritable army of porcelain dolls lie in attics and antique shops, all filled with bits of reality shared with little girls now grandmothers with fond memories of their company.

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  2. Dolly knows all, tells nothing. The best kind of confidant.

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  3. "How wonderful it was to have and hold / Someone who would listen, sooth and heal without uttering a word!" - for sure!

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  4. Lots of sympathy from those much loved dolls. My sister also had a BFF imaginary, in whom she could confide.
    Nice write. Sunita. Too bad little kids are subject to scaring adults. My dad was terribly mean to Mom, and to me.
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    1. My sympathies, Jim. Well, that was another world which had no child support or counsellors.

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  5. Your words bring dolls into sharp focus, make me realise that, thanks to being born in 1941, dolls were never a part of my youngest years. I was eleven before I had a proper 'baby doll' , but by then I had real baby cousins to 'play' with, and didn't feel I'd missed out on anything!

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    1. How lucky you are Jinsky, But there are many who found or still finds solace in the company of those voiceless friends :)

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  6. Yes a doll listens and does not tell nor critique. A lovely poem for the image Sunita!

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  7. Sometimes the best friend is the one who silently listens. And is always there.

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  8. I can only imagine how many identify with the emotion, message, story in your poem ... well done.

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  9. Sunita, I feel the yearning for safety and comfort, found in a doll as a child and dreamed of as an adult. {{{HUGS}}}

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    1. You touched the truth to a degree, Lisa :)

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  10. Oh if dolls could talk, I think they would speak this poem. Great write

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  11. I wasn’t drawn to dolls, until I got into my teens — and they weren’t porcelain… 😉. Excellent write Sunita. Perhaps someday all those abandoned dolls will return seeking their owners. I feel a Stephen King movie brewing… 😱

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    1. Hahahahaha.... you have an intriguing imagination, Rob :D. Stephen King is bored with the dolls in his movies :P

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  12. Evocative poem--the not-quite-permeable fairy stories and the solid presence of the doll are vivid.

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