The Sunday Muse #184
A shimmering
Slice of hope
We pray for
In the tempest
Called life.
Just a flickering
And every worry
Gets uncluttered.
What a powerful
Source of inspiration !
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A slice of hope can feed millions. A lovely poem for the image Sunita! Enjoy your vacation.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful and welcome slice of hope!
ReplyDeleteHope can light the heart, even just a slice of it. This is sparse and strong.
ReplyDeleteA shimmering slice of hope is just what we need!
ReplyDeleteLovely; that tiny flame of hope is quite welcome!
ReplyDelete'Just a flickering' ~~~ and sometimes that is all it takes. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteSo true. Hope keeps us going, doesn't it, however small the flame?!
ReplyDeletepax,
dora
All it takes to vanquish darkness is a flickering of a flame. Beautifully said, Sunita.
ReplyDeleteHope is like medicine for the soul. Beautifully worded in your poem.
ReplyDeleteHope keeps us going - love the image of it as a shimmering slice.
ReplyDeleteThe tiniest bit of hope is so powerful.
ReplyDeleteYes, even just a sliver of hope holds such promise.
ReplyDelete'shimmering slice of hope' - gorgeous writing, Sunita!
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