Saturday, March 12, 2022

A Mind of One's Own

 The Sunday Muse #202



They were friends

Those soundless words

Filling lonely hours

In silent raptures.


A woman was born

Understanding the world

Through the dancing muses

A lonely war she fought

Fighting against the odds

The world stood still.


In the periphery of solitude

Phrases, verses, words, and rhymes

Merged and created

A powerhouse of daring thoughts

She molded her dreams.


Immersed in those silent friends

Life took a full circle

When she faced the gender bias

She burned the patriarchal pages 

Letting her actions

Speak louder than words.



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9 comments:

  1. Love how you articulated 'the female journey' .... well done!

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  2. Books companioned my journey as well. I definitely relate to this poem, especially the burning of the patriarchal pages! Smiles.

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  3. Your poem echos the inspiration of the lives so many women have lived! The last line is a powerful close! I love this Sunita!

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  4. “In the periphery of solitude” ... I love that. What a gift to truly have a mind of your own.

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  5. Sunita, as I read this I thought of "know thy enemy." I see she gleaned what she needed then initiated the next level for herself. I love the empowerment in this <3

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  6. When she faced the gender bias
    She burned the patriarchal pages
    Letting her actions
    Speak louder than words

    She is certainly a lady of strength Sunita, holding out on her own in any impending battle of the sexes.

    Hank

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  7. As a child I loved to be at our small library, sitting on the small stairs (just 3 steps), reading books, one after another, until I read them all. Even those I didn't yet understand.

    "In the periphery of solitude

    Phrases, verses, words, and rhymes

    Merged and created

    A powerhouse of daring thoughts

    She molded her dreams.¨

    Yes.

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  8. Yea for the library! And for the ability to use the resources therein.

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  9. Yes, Those soundless words, found a voice in her actions in life. She is a woman of strong character. Climbing the ladder of understanding.

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