Monday, October 10, 2016

The Obstacles

DAY-8 #OCTPOWRIMO-2016




Cruising through the journey
Life weaves a web of remorse,
Every force a tempting destiny,
Challenging the lucid course.

 The mind does wanders,
Through the porous blunders
Dodging every pain lucidly
We embrace life wholeheartedly.

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3 comments:

  1. Annis CassellsOctober 12, 2016 at 8:03 AM

    I enjoyed the rhyme: remorse, force, course. And especially liked this line: "Every force a tempting destiny." Thank you! xoA

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  2. SunitaOctober 12, 2016 at 9:12 AM

    Thank you dear Annis for your appreciation :) Trying to catch up with the prompts :D

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  3. Deepti AgarwalOctober 13, 2016 at 2:12 AM

    Like the positivity in this.. :)

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