Saturday, August 28, 2021

We Heal Each Other

 The Sunday Muse  



                                                       Image suggested by Susie Clevenge


pods of gliding life

sliced by time, pain and distance

meet at the crossroads.





Participating in : The Sunday Muse

25 comments:

  1. As you know, I'm not a fan of this form, but i do like the pods. Happy weekend, Sunita.

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    1. Happy weekend Shay. I am glad you liked this one.Thank you :)

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  2. I think there is a caution sign at every crossroad --- and aptly so!

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    1. Yes, there is unpredictability at every crossroad. Thank you Bev for passing by :)

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  3. All great and wounded relationships meet somewhere. Lovely haiku Sunita!

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  4. This is big and strong Sunita, so much said here! Excellent.

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    1. Thank you very much, Rob. Much appreciated :)

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  5. A generous poem! I love the sense of immensity from the word "pods".

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  6. A complete story within your haiku .... cheers.

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    1. I wanted to fit all the emotions in that...thank you, Helen :)

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  7. I like thinking of them as "pods"!

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    1. Right, that is how relationships work. Thank you Qbit :)

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  8. Crossroads are a good place to meet. I am glad that they did.
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    1. Yes, they had to meet somewhere. Thank you Jim :)

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  9. 'pods of gliding life' - I think this is a great line.

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  10. This is so beautiful... Yes, we can heal eachother.

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    1. I am glad you liked the haiku. Thank you, Helen :)

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  11. Yes, like a fissure in a relationship. Thank you, Christine :)

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