Monday, October 10, 2016

The Obstacles

DAY-8 #OCTPOWRIMO-2016




Cruising through the journey
Life weaves a web of remorse,
Every force a tempting destiny,
Challenging the lucid course.

The mind does wanders,
Through the porous blunders
Dodging every pain lucidly
We embrace life wholeheartedly.



3 comments:

  1. I enjoyed the rhyme: remorse, force, course. And especially liked this line: "Every force a tempting destiny." Thank you! xoA

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  2. Thank you dear Annis for your appreciation :) Trying to catch up with the prompts :D

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