Wednesday, October 4, 2017

A whorl of colours


Day-4 OctPoWriMo 2017 (Prompt-Between The Clouds And The Water )




Between the clouds and the water
Lies the world of a dreamer.
Where dreams walk on the waves
Where poetry hides in its shades.

In the light of a day
In the midst of a night
Moves the muse of her thoughts
Serenading a sunrise and a sunset.

Sometimes poetry hides
On the wings of hope and laughter.
Sometimes poetry sings
In the waning of seasons.

There are many shades
Colourfully adorned
Suffixed and prefixed
In the dreamer's world


Where poetry hides in its shades
Where dreams walk on the waves
Lies the world of a dreamer
Between the clouds and the water.






11 comments:

  1. This is very beautiful and evocative. The photo is wonderful too.

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    1. Thank you very much Cara and Jenni. The pic is by my daughter at San Diego Bay :)

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  2. From one dreamer to another - lovely poem, Sunita!

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    1. Poets are born dreamers. Thank you very much :)

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  3. Beautiful - it would seem that your poetry is hardly hiding, it is shining brilliant.

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    1. It does hide and reveals once in a while. Thank you for going through it :)

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  4. Beautiful, Sunita. I love how you reordered the first stanza and made it the last stanza. A favorite line: Where dreams walk on the waves." Thank you. xoA

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    1. Thank you very much Annis. This was a rushed work. Was busy yesterday and couldn't keep up with the prompt. :)

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  5. That's lovely! Flows like a dream..

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