The Sunday Muse #194
An aged vision
Frosted
Chiseled
In tiny specks
Silvered layers
Tempered in rhymes
Peeps
Tempts
A forged existence
What one wants to
See
feel
Lies in a lot more
Silent echoes
Rings
Sings
Through a timeless frame.
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I love how you captured so much of the image and vision in this lovely poem Sunita! "What one wants to see" there is so much truth in this. Beautiful writing my friend!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Carrie. You comments always warm my heart :)
DeleteYour words as lovely as the droplets on the spectacles.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bev. Much appreciated :)
Delete"tiny specks / Silvered layers" nice play! The poem sings through a timeless frame indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank you qbit :)
Deleteeach line like the drop of rain on the timeless frame - lovely
ReplyDeleteLoved your comparison. Thank you, Laura :)
DeleteSunita, I like the metaphors you use to weave your lovely poem.
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Thanks Lisa. The words just flowed :)
DeleteOh how I love ... the Timeless Frame Perspective on things !!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Helen :)
DeleteSeeing what one wants to see. I love it. So many dont realize that how they see colours their world.
ReplyDeleteYes, prespective differs from person to person. Thank you Sherry for the read :)
DeleteA timeless frame - great ending and wordplay on the glasses.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much :)
DeleteThe last line is spot on.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sumana :)
DeleteThis has an evanescent eeriness that beckons me deeper into the words.
ReplyDeleteTo be honest, the prompt just spilled the words. Such a wonderful image. Thank you Chrissa, for the lovely comment :)
Delete"What one wants to see" ...
ReplyDeleteLove it!
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Thank you Syl :)
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