The Sunday Muse
a broken past chased
promises and mirages
goodbyes never heal.
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I am taking part in The Write Tribe Festival of Words 8th – 14th December 2013. Day 3 of the Write Tribe Festival of Words prompt--... -
DAY-2 OctPoWriMo-2015 Color bleeds In different shades Sometimes the skin Oozes a dozen sores Camouflaging feelings. Some love...
Nice response to the prompt
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday
Much💛love
Thank you, Gillena :)
DeleteBreathtaking--especially the final line.
ReplyDeleteI am so happy you liked the haiku.Thank you :)
DeleteNice haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank you, qbit :)
DeleteIt occurred to me "chaste promises" would work equally well. This is a great haiku!
ReplyDeleteYes, that too will fit perfectly. Thank you for the appreciation :)
Delete"promises and mirages".......I so resonate with that!
ReplyDeleteThat is how it turns out right. Thank you Sherry :)
DeleteHaiku. Whee.
ReplyDeleteShay :)
DeleteGoodbyes and healing .... a tough combination. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteIndeed. Thank you, Helen :)
DeleteVery evocative words. I enjoyed them, thanks.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much.:)
DeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteYour haiku and my poem are cousins in poetry. We spoke of similar things. Lovely Haiku!
ReplyDeleteWhat a coincidence. Thank you,Carrie :)
Delete'goodbyes never heal' - 😢. Lovely haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you ,Marion :)
DeleteExcellent haiku about lingering sorrow.
ReplyDeleteYes, the monochrome pic evoked some old memories :)
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