Saturday, September 25, 2021

A Lone Sentinel

 The Sunday Muse #179






How you store memories within the walls of

Brick and mortar?

How come sepia shaded shadows bring images of a dancing past

A happy childhood and echoes of laughter?


The magic word is...nostalgia!

So many floating memories 

Lurks in invisible shapes

In every nook and corner.


Wants, desires, trust and beliefs

Carefree childhood, bubbling lives

A peal of birth, a cry of death

Everything amalgamated 

In the fires of existence.


Once, seasons of  warmth and experiences

Trudged through the whispering boughs

Now, there are silent wails

As the birds encroach the space

Where once emotional bonds survived.


Autumn not only breathes in the hearts of a past

It even touches the soul of a bricked wall.



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13 comments:

  1. Oh yes, the magic word is nostalgia.......the past shines golden the older we grow......a lovely poem.

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  2. "Autumn not only breathes in the hearts of a past / It even touches the soul of a bricked wall." Entropy comes for us all...

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  3. This image captures us all, and inspires us to speak for the memories it holds within. Well done.

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  4. So many truths wonderfully spoken here Sunita! So many floating memories indeed! This is so lovely!

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  5. indeed, that would be the magic word. and very warm feeling poem, enjoyed very much

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  6. Warm and perfectly autumnal. Love the ending stanza.

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  7. Ah yes, the magic of nostalgia. Love this, especially the last two lines.

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  8. You are right .... the seasons permeate any and every wall we face. Personal and thru bricks.

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  9. An interesting read, Sunita. I chose this question to try answering. "How you store memories within the walls of Brick and mortar?" A good reason for taking pictures, visit the silent walls with viewing photos and then conversation with the elders. Our pictures before we flooded in 1979 were all destroyed. Most everyone older than we have died or lost their memory. And the silenced buildings have been destroyed.
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  10. Such a poignant travel through time, emotions,and seasons. The house here has been through everything its residents have, of course it is bound to have absorbed some of the feelings. Nicely done.

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  11. Yes our memories become housed in the places we’ve lived. This poem is beautiful and creates a perfect nostalgic mood.

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  12. "Everything amalgamated

    In the fires of existence."

    Wonderful piece!

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