Saturday, July 3, 2021

Storm

 The Sunday Muse


                                                  


moving and moaning

desires dressed in solitude

breathe in silent storms.




Participating in : The Sunday Muse

22 comments:

  1. you say so much in these few memorable lines
    "desires dressed in solitude" - esepcially

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  2. Succinct words capture the essence of this week's prompt photo. :-)

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    1. Pleasure to know you liked the poem.Thank you Jinksy :)

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  3. Nice one Sunita. Happy Sunday

    Much💜love

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  4. This makes me feel the world could be captured in the creak of wood on water. Lovely.

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    1. What a lovely way to express your thoughts. Thank you, Chrissa :)

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  5. Many face storms within. All we can do is move forward and breathe. A beautiful Haiku Sunita.

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    1. Thank you very much, Carrie for the constant encouragement. Your prompts are inspiring to write some beautiful thoughts :)

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  6. This is sensuous and serious ... Cheers!

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  7. Fine three, Sunita.
    Solitude indeed, per the photo the place is deserted.
    ..

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    1. That boat personifies solitude of a human being. Thank you Jim for the appreciation :)

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  8. "silent storms" such a great phrase.

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    1. Yes, we all go through those in our own space.vThank you Lisa, for passing by :)

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