Tuesday, October 20, 2015

My Heartbeat

Day 20, OctPoWriMo-2015


                                                                

                                                  

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Sweet memories ...whispers love

love brings untold… happiness

happiness… charged with tenderness

tenderness infused with… intimacy

intimacy caress,,, the heart

heart… filled with your warmth

warmth of frenzied …passions

passions… inflamed … softly

softly by your …images

images …fondly strengthen

strengthen… the bond of love

 love whispers … sweet memories.


 #OctPoWriMo :


Poetry Prompt: Love poem.

Poetry type: Loop Poetry,




18 comments:

  1. This is lovely and touching. Thank you.

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  2. Reading it quickly as it lead me along, I could feel the feelings of new love!

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    1. Thank you very much Carol. It was written in a jiffy :)

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  3. Good one!! I think I need to try this form, it's lovely. :)

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    1. Thank you. There are 4 styles in this format..managed to do this one :)

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  4. I like this very much. Thank you for sharing

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  5. I love how you brought it back to sweet memories, well done. Thanks for sharing with OctPoWriMo. =)

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    1. You made my day, Morgan. Thank you very much for the inspiration :)

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  6. sweet love .. good that u tried Loop form..

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  7. Beautiful flow and beautiful words. I love it!

    Thank you for visiting us at poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com

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  8. The created some great rhythm in that poem. Well done!!

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    1. Glad to know that you liked the poem, Cindy :)

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