DAY-6, OctPoWriMo-2015
Pain ,
Fissured:
Came encored,
Bringing along
A magical muse.
Encouraging,pushing
In those disfigured moments
Letting freedom a fair chance to-
Rejuvenate a wingless force
Make a future in poetic verse.
Used the Etheree format.10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.
Participating in.. e .http://www.octpowrimo.com/
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Pain ,
Fissured:
Came encored,
Bringing along
A magical muse.
Encouraging,pushing
In those disfigured moments
Letting freedom a fair chance to-
Rejuvenate a wingless force
Make a future in poetic verse.
Used the Etheree format.10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.
Participating in.. e .http://www.octpowrimo.com/
Beautiful! I want to write an Etheree poem now!!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed writing in this form. Thank you Carol :)
Deletehow beautifully pain finds a way out in this lovely verse. :)
ReplyDeleteOnly words have the power to heal the pain :) Who knows it better than You and I right :)
DeleteThis is really beautiful! The last three lines are my favorite! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHey Fifi...long time..glad to see your comment. Thank you :)
DeleteBeautifully written!
ReplyDeleteGlad to know you liked it Nithya. Thanx a lot :)
DeleteBeautifully written!
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Thank you Lori :)
DeleteVery nice! Etheree is one of my favourite forms.
ReplyDeleteI wrote in this format first time. Thank you Karin :)
DeleteLoved it to the core :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Amrita :)
DeleteBeautiful! I live with chronic pain, so this really speaks to me.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting me at poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com
Thank you Cara..Pain does bring out the best in a poet :)
DeleteA nicely executed Etheree! Bastet
ReplyDeleteThank you Bastet :)Your appreciation means a lot.
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