Day-8 OctPoWriMo-2018
Prompt: Moments of Madness( Blitz Poem)
Prompt: Moments of Madness( Blitz Poem)
Image credit: Sneha
Time is cruel
Time brings pain
Pain comes unnoticed
Pain is a burden
Burden to carry lifelong
Burden which erodes the soul
Soul gets mauled
Soul feels the sores
Sores of existence
Sores of emptiness
Emptiness followed by doubts
Emptiness carries past dirt
Dirt which was not needed
Dirt heaped by blood
Blood of relation
Blood of desire
Desire of too many things
Desire for happiness
Happiness is a mirage
Happiness in a feeling
Feeling of being lost
Feeling of been alive
Alive to taste life
Alive to feel lust
Lust for that one love
Lust for fulfilling dreams
Dreams of touching the stars
Dreams to dance in the moonlight
Moonlight in the soul
Moonlight in the dark nights
Nights spent in loneliness
Nights wearing shroud of solitude
Solitude in the daytime
Solitude among people
People who are apathetic
People who are your friends
Friends in the wolf skin
Friends in the guise of angels
Angels in the time of need
Angels to wrap in an embrace
Embrace one and all
Embrace pain and feel the beat
Beat of heart
Beat of life
Life lived in harmony
Life in chasing moments
Moments to be alone
Moments lost forever
Forever...
Alone...
This was fantastic. Loved the flow leading to the quite brilliant end.
ReplyDeleteThank you VARAD. This is my favourite form of weaving words :)
DeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rod. Good to see you :)
DeleteForever alone.. Good finale
ReplyDeleteThank you Namratha. That is what we are in a nutshell. Alone :)
DeleteI love the movement toward the ending.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Odhran :)Much appreciated.
DeleteThis poem ramped up so well. light to dark, dark to light to dark
ReplyDeleteThank you Jenni :)
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