Day-6 OctPoWriMo
Prompt: Conquered (Rondeau)
Beware, my dear! Don't fall in love,
Without the signs from far above,
When hearts meet and feel the beat
There is the force to reckon with
The same fate met by Adam and Eve.
Love crushes and makes shed tears
While trying to mend the aching hearts
Too many doors to open and feel free.
Beware, my dear!
The lovers take risk all the way
But there is a thin layer made of clay
A battle that cannot be conquered
Dreamers, who are forever doomed
It is a not a victory when emotions play...
Beware, my dear!
Prompt: Conquered (Rondeau)
Beware, my dear! Don't fall in love,
Without the signs from far above,
When hearts meet and feel the beat
There is the force to reckon with
The same fate met by Adam and Eve.
Love crushes and makes shed tears
While trying to mend the aching hearts
Too many doors to open and feel free.
Beware, my dear!
The lovers take risk all the way
But there is a thin layer made of clay
A battle that cannot be conquered
Dreamers, who are forever doomed
It is a not a victory when emotions play...
Beware, my dear!
Participating in http://www.octpowrimo.com/2018/10/day-6-conquered.html
I like the way you pulled this together. My favorite line, "But there is a thin layer made of clay."
ReplyDeleteIt was not easy as I was running behind time. Just managed to catch up late in the night. Thank you Lili :)
DeleteI'm well inclined to agree.
ReplyDeleteYou did an excellent job here.
Thank you very much, Cara. Trying :)
DeleteGood work on the Rondeau. You captured the essence of the title so well
ReplyDeleteThank you Namratha :)
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