Day-23 OctPoWriMo-2018
Prompt: See me
There is something within
You are blind
She is life
A universal truth
Open your eyes
See, below the layers
A heart that beats
Listen and feel
Touch her soul
Feel her lips
She breathes
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Prompt: See me
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You see her skinThere is something within
You are blind
She is life
A universal truth
Open your eyes
See, below the layers
A heart that beats
Listen and feel
Touch her soul
Feel her lips
She breathes
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Love this - it is an invitation to go beneath the skin into the soul. Thanks for sharing this intimate writing! :)
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i am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
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call/whatsapp:+2349057261346
Nice! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you. Cara :)
DeleteSimple, elegant, effective.
ReplyDeleteThank you Varadha :)
Deletewow! short but deep :)
ReplyDeleteLadylee,I loved your poem too.Thank you :)
DeleteEvery word of this is powerful. I was going to copy/paste my favourite lines, but then I realized that's the whole poem.
ReplyDeleteEsther,thank you very much for the appreciation.I wanted to try a haibun but ended up with these few lines. :)
DeleteThis is wonderful. It says so much and is so thought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteThank you,Shuku. Much appreciated :)
DeleteVery nice
ReplyDeleteThank you, Peggy :)
DeleteThis is beautiful.A woman is much more than her outward appearance.
ReplyDeleteShe indeed is! If only our society too consider her and equal part of its existence. Thank you, Punam :)
Deletevery much alive, with a pleasant countenance
ReplyDeleteThank you Lili :)
Deletei am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
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call/whatsapp:+2349057261346
i am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
or
call/whatsapp:+2349057261346