DAY-3 OctPoWriMo-2015
Image from Google.
 Scattered thoughts
                                  A few
                                                 Jumps
                                                              On
                                                               In
                                                   Bold
                                   Letters
 Showing fissures
                                  At uneven
                                                    Points
                                                                One
                                                                Two
                                                   Shapes
                                   Curved
 In ominous three.
This prompt really had me going for something I have never done before,  :)
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Very nice shape poem with the 3.
ReplyDeleteBut I especially liked how you could read the three lines justified to the left as a separate poem:
Scattered Thoughts
Showing Fissures
In Ominous Three
Not sure if you intended that bonus poem inside the poem...but I thought it was really cool. :-)
Thank you Anna :) That is what I too felt after I finished writing the poem :)
ReplyDeleteVery creative!! loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteCreativity at its best :-)
ReplyDeleteThanx Amrita :) Hope you are enjoying this journey with words :)
DeleteVery creative!!
ReplyDeleteHighly appreciated your comment Carol :)
DeleteBravo!!!
ReplyDeleteThanx Dee :)
DeletePerfectly Serpentine slithering through my grips.
ReplyDeleteThe forbidding thoughts had no other way to surface :D
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