Wednesday, October 24, 2018

Take a Chance

Day-25 OctPoWriMo-2018
Prompt: The Door Goes Both Ways (Form: Triquain)




Image: Sneha

Hold my hand,
Let's walk through the heartache
Let's burn together, in life's embrace
Tomorrow is a distant dream, no place for guilt
The barriers are too strong to break
Many thorns are strewn in
Still, let's walk.
Stand by me,
Walk through that silent door
Hear the rhapsody of soulful chimes
Time to feel the passionate fragrance of seasons
You cannot receive without giving
Take a chance for today
Hold my hand.






Thorns are strewn in, still, let's walk, hold my hand






(Here is a link..to one of my old poems. Wrote it some 10 years back ago, and got published in an anthology too. As it is related to DOORS, thought of sharing with you all. It is posted in my old blog...http://musingsofsurvival.blogspot.com/2009/12/invisible-doors.html )







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    1. i am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
      or
      call/whatsapp:+2349057261346




      i am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
      or
      call/whatsapp:+2349057261346

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  2. Beautifully written. Give and take is necessary for relationships to succeed.

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    1. You are right, Cara.It cannot swing in one way. Thank you for your constant encouragement :)

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  3. "Tomorrow is a distant dream, no place for guilt" Well done.

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    1. Working and writing poetry is taking a lot of time. This year I am determined to go all the way. Almost done with 25 days. Thank you for the motivation, Morgan. Honoured :)

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  4. very earnest words braided together to form a lovely poem. Well penned, Sunita.

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    1. Thank you Varadha...managed to weave some flowing thoughts :)

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  5. So beautiful, the call of a forgiving heart!

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  6. such a beautiful sentiment captured in a beautiful form

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  8. i am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
    or
    call/whatsapp:+2349057261346




    i am ERIC BRUNT by name. Greetings to every one that is reading this testimony. I have been rejected by my wife after three(3) years of marriage just because another Man had a spell on her and she left me and the kid to suffer. one day when i was reading through the web, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com have help a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his address and he told me that a man had a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. i believed him and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back. because i am now happy with my wife. Thanks for helping me Dr Akhere contact him on email: AKHERETEMPLE@gmail.com
    or
    call/whatsapp:+2349057261346

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