Tuesday, October 22, 2019

Broken

Day-22 OctPoWriMo-2019
Prompt: Broken
Form: Free Verse


                                                                         image: frend 


In the tiny whorl 

It breaks

Into a thousand pieces

There is nothing left

The stream dries up

The broken flesh cringes

Laden with numbered aches

Some are too strong

Some are already worn

Delving deeper

One finds

The stretched marks

Stained and dark

Not ready to mend

Not ready to bend

The harder the push

The darker they become

Those men-o-pausal blues.




Participating in :OctPoWriMo-2019




8 comments:

  1. I had a very easy menopause, which I think is deserved since I had 40 years of periods from hell with bleeding to the point of hemorrhage and cramps that left me doubled over in pain. Good times!
    Sometimes being a woman is not oodles of fun.

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    1. It indeed not fun when the body starts aching. Thank you, Cara :)

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  2. Oh, the periods are such a double-edged sword! And menopause can give the blues. Love how you wrote about it.

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    1. Menopause is a roller coaster ride. Thank you, Punam :)

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  3. our hormones rule us more than we would like to believe...

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    1. They are the mood swingers. Thank you, Jade :)

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