Thursday, October 10, 2019

Touch

Day-10 OctPoWriMo-2019
Prompt: Touch
Form: Clarity Pyramid



LOVE
desire
emotion

heartbeats run amok
a cliffhanger moment
softly touching scented breathe

"melting moments of sweet nothings"



Participating in :OctPoWriMo-2019



8 comments:

  1. Wonderful last line <3
    JadeLi @http://tao-talk.com

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    1. Thank you very much, Jade. I did try to comment on your link, but it didn't open.

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  2. I do like that juxtaposition of 'heartbeats run amok' with 'softly touching'. Somehow that captures that sense of 'touch' in a new relationship -- or perhaps, even a relationship that has lasted a long time. :)

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    1. Yes, the flush of first love and the adrenaline flowing without warning :) Thank you, Beth for passing by :)

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  3. Softly touching scented breath - lovely

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