Day-1 OctPoWriMo-2019
Prompt: Dark Night of the Soul
Form: Free Verse
Image: Sunita Prasad
A silent prayer
A little hope
On a whorl spins
When pitched darkness
Touches the lonely nights
The dirge of solitude
Sets the soul on fire
Moments of hopeless chaos
Suppress layers of dreams
A chain of thoughts
Swirl and swirl and swirl
Reawakening a thirst
To embrace, to feel and to hope
As life is a miracle
And I breathe!
Participating in OctPoWriMo-2019
Prompt: Dark Night of the Soul
Form: Free Verse
A silent prayer
A little hope
On a whorl spins
When pitched darkness
Touches the lonely nights
The dirge of solitude
Sets the soul on fire
Moments of hopeless chaos
Suppress layers of dreams
A chain of thoughts
Swirl and swirl and swirl
Reawakening a thirst
To embrace, to feel and to hope
As life is a miracle
And I breathe!
Participating in OctPoWriMo-2019
A silent prayer
ReplyDeleteA little hope
I love that. Well done with your poem Sunita.
Thank you very much :)
DeleteA silent prayer
ReplyDeleteA little hope
I love that. Well done with your poem Sunita.
"Life is a miracle" is something I try never to forget.
ReplyDeleteEsther, glad to see you joining the challenge this year too. Thank you very much :)
DeleteI like "reawakening a thirst." This poem has nice movement.
ReplyDeleteAs we age the introspective mood sets in. Thank you for visiting my blog :)
DeleteI got a sense of falling through your poem, and then you pulled out of your tailspin. Excellent poem.
ReplyDeleteJade Li at http://tao-talk.com
Thank you very much for the appreciation. :)
DeleteLovely to read your words again, Sunita! Yes to embracing life and being hopeful.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you, Punam. Thank you very much . Good luck on the poetic journey :)
DeleteNicely done, Sunita, glad to have you along for OctPoWriMo!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Morgan.I am glad I could make it this year too. :)
DeleteBrilliant!👏👏
ReplyDeleteOh, yes! That yearning! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Carol :)
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