Day-25 OctPoWriMo-2019
Prompt: White
Form: Musette
image: Sunita Prasad
Moonbeams,
Lusty night,
Daydreams!
White hair-
Age in phase
Unfair!
Shrouded,
The last nail
Bereaved!
Participating in:OctPoWriMo-2019
Prompt: White
Form: Musette
image: Sunita Prasad
Moonbeams,
Lusty night,
Daydreams!
White hair-
Age in phase
Unfair!
Shrouded,
The last nail
Bereaved!
Participating in:OctPoWriMo-2019
This poem did an amazing job of carrying me through an entire life with so few words. Impressive.
ReplyDeleteThe first thought that crossed my mind when I saw the prompt was to write about racism, but the style didn't do justice to the rant. These 3 lines format was a challenge. Thank you, Maria for the appreciation :)
DeleteAmazing musette, Sunita. Love this.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, Punam :)
DeleteSo skilfully done with each stanza/phase. I think my favorite is the first one <3
ReplyDeleteAha! Those youthful days. Thank you very much, Jade :)
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