Saturday, October 26, 2019

The Unspoken Promises

Day-26 OctPoWriMo-2019
Prompt: What has been unspoken
Form: Joseph's Star

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Love
A poison?
Or an antidote?
Mysterious heartbeat breathes
Breathlessly wrapped in sweet smiles
Sweet poison maybe
The blushing
Pain

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Stars
Are you real?
Shiny shades adorned
Kaleidoscope in the air
Smiling at the silent death
Canopy of boughs
Turns into
Ash

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Love
Silent pleas
Speak sometimes the words
Do you have the same feelings?
The unspoken words do hurt
Can you make a move?
Just for once
Please.



Participating in : OctPoWriMo-2019


6 comments:

  1. There is nothing unspoken in your verses! Beautifully expressed.

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    1. Thank you very much. Creating verses under pressure have its own downfall. You are too kind :)

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  2. Love these "Stars". Must try this form

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    1. Thank you, Grams. Yes,you should give it a try :)

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  3. You've nailed this form, Sunita. I love all 3 of these.

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    1. Thank you very much Jade,for your appreciation :)

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